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Gone

It was so magical

You suddenly looked at my way

And I found myself blush right away

But she suddenly came

Prancing around

Holding you in her arms

And I heard my heart crashing

As she took you away

Gone. It means to no longer exist. In this poem, gone means no longer existing. Why? Because as the guy got taken, the girls feeling from the start disappeared, it was replaced by pain. My favorite line was “you suddenly looked at my way” who wouldn’t want that? But that “look” started everything for the girl, she fell but the guy was no longer there.

 

by Jem Javier

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